Kaitlin
Book Worm
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Registered: 6-12-2008
Location: Canada... :P
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..No name. haha
Is this any good?
A camera flashes
you strike a post
you are always wearing
those name brand clothes
your shades are big
never leave your head
those lips are plump
and painted red
You put on a smile
but who are you fooling
the boys might stare
and maybe be drooling
but you’re fed up with this life
your about to break down
your friends are all backstabbers
and your about to drown
in the deperssion and madness
in this horrible life
you need to get help
your wrists hit knifes
You need a friend
someone to trust
someone to lean on
before you combust.
Sorry. I suck at poetry.
^^Found on Tinypic.
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xStephx
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No, no. You don't suck. I really like it! 
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x. Jessica-Louise .x
YA Obsessed
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I like it a lot too do you write many poems? I'd love to read some more!
Edward, Eммεтт, Jasper, Jacob, Seth, Ian, Jared,
Dιмιтrι, Mason, Peeta, Gαℓε,
Rhage, Heath, Erik,
Stark, мαяcυs, Valek, Seth, Niαℓℓ, Henry
Boys in books are just Better ♥
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*~Book Worm 16~*
Wordsmith
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i loved it! it is SO much better than what i can do! Very Good!
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jen.xx
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hey that was good!
you delivered the meaning well, but the last bit made me laugh, i pictured someone literally combusting hehe XD but i totally get why you used combust
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L o v e O f M y L i f e
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Mind, Tea Life by So[Censored]su Sen ღ
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xXoliveXx
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Location: anywhere theres books!!!
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duuuuude thats amazing do you write any more??? i would love to read some....u got talent love yas
~OLIVE~
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